{"id":3422,"date":"2022-08-01T18:02:00","date_gmt":"2022-08-01T16:02:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/eldar.cz\/tompatrick\/?p=3422"},"modified":"2022-04-30T08:49:29","modified_gmt":"2022-04-30T06:49:29","slug":"kapitola-31-vantelbooklist-aneb-v-odlouceni-stale-spolu","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/eldar.cz\/tompatrick\/citymeans\/city-means-i-mesto-plne-navratu\/kapitola-31-vantelbooklist-aneb-v-odlouceni-stale-spolu","title":{"rendered":"Kapitola 31 – Vantelbooklist aneb v odlou\u010den\u00ed st\u00e1le spolu"},"content":{"rendered":"
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\u201eTak to… tak to mi v\u016fbec nedo\u0161lo, to se… za to se hrozn\u011b moc omlouv\u00e1m,\u201d vy\u0161lo najednou z Martina provinile, jako by za Heleninu smrt snad mohl pr\u00e1v\u011b on.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u201eAle, Martine, no tak, netva\u0159 se p\u0159ece tak ztr\u00e1pen\u011b,\u201d za\u010dala ho chl\u00e1cholit Alexandra. \u201eTy jsi p\u0159ece nic z toho nezavinil. Helena prost\u011b u\u017e byla star\u0161\u00ed pan\u00ed v letech a <\/span>zkr\u00e1tka p\u0159i\u0161el jej\u00ed \u010das. N\u011bco podobn\u00e9ho ostatn\u011b \u010dek\u00e1 za n\u011bjakou tu dobu ka\u017ed\u00e9ho z n\u00e1s. Vem to z t\u00e9 hez\u010d\u00ed str\u00e1nky. Oni dva se po cel\u00fd \u017eivot m\u011bli nesm\u00edrn\u011b r\u00e1di a pro\u017eili spolu plno \u0161\u0165astn\u00fdch moment\u016f.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n

\u201eJo, j\u00e1 v\u00edm. J\u00e1 jen, \u017ee jsem zkr\u00e1tka zapomn\u011bl vz\u00edt v potaz i tuto mo\u017enost.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n

\u201eTo nic, to se p\u0159ece st\u00e1v\u00e1, kv\u016fli tomu se p\u0159ece na tebe nebudu zlobit,\u201d poznamenala mile Alexandra, pokusila se v\u00edce pousm\u00e1t a p\u0159ejela po Helenin\u00fdch \u0161ediv\u00fdch vlasech, jako by j\u00ed je cht\u011bla upravit. To Martina p\u0159im\u011blo k nov\u00fdm \u00favah\u00e1m.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u201eKdy\u017e tedy Helmut souhlasil s t\u00edm, aby se se svoj\u00ed zesnulou \u017eenou po letech znovu ,setkal\u00b4\u00b4, to mus\u00ed m\u00edt opravdu dost silnou v\u016fli. Co kdy\u017e ho ty pomysln\u00e9 hovory ale stejn\u011b za\u010dnou postupn\u011b skli\u010dovat a on se tak propadne do je\u0161t\u011b mnohem v\u011bt\u0161\u00edho vnit\u0159n\u00edho str\u00e1d\u00e1n\u00ed? Ne \u017ee bych mu to teda n\u011bjak p\u0159\u00e1l.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n

\u201eSamoz\u0159ejm\u011b, \u017ee nejprve p\u0159\u00edpadn\u00e9ho z\u00e1jemce sezn\u00e1m\u00edm s celou v\u011bc\u00ed do co nejpodrobn\u011bj\u0161\u00edch detail\u016f. Spole\u010dn\u011b si o tom popov\u00edd\u00e1me do v\u011bt\u0161\u00ed hloubky, tak jak te\u010f \u010din\u00edme my dva, p\u0159i\u010dem\u017e mu rovn\u011b\u017e d\u00e1v\u00e1m nahl\u00ed\u017eet do desek jin\u00e9ho \u017eadatele, pro n\u011bj\u017e m\u00e1m ji\u017e v\u0161e na\u010disto p\u0159ipraveno. Kdy\u017e p\u0159\u00edpadn\u00fd z\u00e1jemce nakonec s\u00e1m usoud\u00ed, \u017ee by mu to pomohlo, po\u017e\u00e1d\u00e1m ho, aby mi bl\u00ed\u017ee pov\u011bd\u011bl o \u010dlov\u011bku, s <\/span>n\u00edm\u017e by se r\u00e1d setkal, a o \u010dem by si s n\u00edm r\u00e1d pov\u00eddal. Z\u00e1jemce mi pak b\u011bhem dal\u0161\u00edho t\u00fddne p\u0159inese pot\u0159ebn\u00e9 podklady a n\u00e1vrhy na p\u0159\u00edpadn\u00e9 rozhovory se svou<\/span> zam\u00fd\u0161lenou postavou plus n\u011bjak\u00e9 ty fotografie k dobru. J\u00e1 to v\u0161e pak zpracuji na po\u010d\u00edta\u010di a pe\u010dliv\u011b rozt\u0159\u00edd\u00edm na jednotliv\u00e9 pap\u00edry, kter\u00e9 pak vsunu do takov\u00fdchto desek a ty pak ulo\u017e\u00edm do p\u0159\u00edslu\u0161n\u00e9 hrom\u00e1dky mezi ostatn\u00ed. Kdy\u017e pak za mnou za n\u011bjakou dobu z\u00e1jemce p\u0159ijde najisto a<\/span> j\u00e1 mu v\u0161e p\u0159ed\u00e1m ve v\u00fdsledn\u00e9 form\u011b, je\u0161t\u011b o tom spolu diskutujeme a j\u00e1 <\/span>se mu dodate\u010dn\u011b zmi\u0148uji o p\u00e1r drobnostech, za to ale pom\u011brn\u011b d\u016fle\u017eit\u00fdch.\u201c \u201eA \u010deho se to konkr\u00e9tn\u011b t\u00fdk\u00e1?\u201d zaj\u00edmalo hned Martina, kter\u00fd sv\u00fdm dychtiv\u00fdm dotazem Alexandru op\u011bt pot\u011b\u0161il. O slovo se p\u0159ihl\u00e1sil i Jeremi\u00e1\u0161, kter\u00fd slo\u017eil Alexand\u0159e h<\/span>lavu do kl\u00edna a nechal se od n\u00ed hladit.<\/p>\n

\u201eJde o tak zvan\u00e9 nabuzen\u00ed p\u0159idru\u017een\u00e9 atmosf\u00e9ry. \u010clov\u011bk by se prost\u011b m\u011bl co nejl\u00e9pe vc\u00edtit a p\u0159evt\u011blit do textu. Sed\u011bt jen tak s\u00e1m v n\u011bjak\u00e9 m\u00edstnosti a ,nala\u010dno\u00b4 si \u010d\u00edst mnohdy nesta\u010d\u00ed. Je t\u0159eba navodit p\u0159\u00edzna\u010dnou atmosf\u00e9ru, kter\u00e1 co nejv\u011brohodn\u011bji napov\u00edd\u00e1 tomu, o \u010dem je v textu pr\u00e1v\u011b \u0159e\u010d. Sv\u00e9 kouzlo v sob\u011b maj\u00ed hudba, v\u016fn\u011b parf\u00e9m\u016f nebo dob\u0159e volen\u00e9 prost\u0159ed\u00ed. Pr\u00e1v\u011b toto v\u0161echno v sob\u011b nese n\u011bco nav\u00edc, jak\u00fdsi skryt\u00fd po\u017eitek, jen\u017e \u010detbu jednotliv\u00fdch stat\u00ed obohat\u00ed a vt\u00e1hne \u010dlov\u011bka daleko intenzivn\u011bji do oboustrann\u00e9 p\u0159\u00edtomnosti<\/span>.\u201d<\/p>\n

Martin se op\u011bt zatv\u00e1\u0159il tak trochu nejist\u011b. Bylo na n\u011bm zn\u00e1t, \u017ee si n\u011bco takov\u00e9ho dok\u00e1\u017ee jen st\u011b\u017e\u00ed p\u0159edstavit.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u201eNevad\u00ed. Uk\u00e1\u017eeme si to na konkr\u00e9tn\u00edm p\u0159\u00edkladu,\u201d rozhodla bez zbyte\u010dn\u00fdch okolk\u016f sebejist\u011b Alexandra. \u201ePokus\u00edm se ti to vysv\u011btlit na t\u00e9to fotografii, kde je Helena zachycen\u00e1 v Holandsku, spole\u010dn\u011b s v\u011btrn\u00fdmi ml\u00fdny a rozlehl\u00fdmi poln\u00edmi l\u00e1ny. V textu je to d\u00e1no do souvislosti s v\u00fdletem, kter\u00fd ona a Helmut do on\u00e9 zem\u011b absolvovali. Obr\u00e1zek a konkr\u00e9tn\u00ed postava tuto iluzi zajist\u00e9 dok\u00e1\u017e\u00ed v jist\u00e9m smyslu v\u011brohodn\u011b navodit, i tak ale Helmut m\u016f\u017ee snadno nab\u00fdt podez\u0159en\u00ed, \u017ee tento okam\u017eik pro\u017e\u00edv\u00e1 v p\u0159\u00edtm\u00ed oby\u010dejn\u00e9ho pokoj\u00edku. Proto je t\u0159eba na tomto momentu zapracovat tro\u0161i\u010dku v\u00edc. Bylo by dobr\u00e9, kdyby si Helmut, a\u017e toto bude \u010d\u00edst, za\u0161el do skute\u010dn\u00e9 p\u0159\u00edrody. Pomyslnou holandskou krajinu dovede nap\u0159\u00edklad v\u011brohodn\u011b nahradit oby\u010dejn\u00e9 \u010desk\u00e9 pole s malebn\u00fdmi domky v pozad\u00ed, prav\u00e9 v\u011btrn\u00e9 ml\u00fdny pak zase jejich men\u0161\u00ed prototypy v podob\u011b zakoupen\u00fdch suven\u00fdr\u016f – kdy\u017e se mu je nepo\u0161t\u011bst\u00ed objevit p\u0159\u00edmo tady u n\u00e1s v jejich skute\u010dn\u00e9 \u017eivotn\u00ed velikosti. A pokud ani toto nenavod\u00ed tu pravou pozitivn\u00ed atmosf\u00e9ru, v\u0161e m\u016f\u017ee dodate\u010dn\u011b vylep\u0161it p\u0159\u00edhodn\u00e1 hudba \u010di aromatick\u00e1 v\u016fn\u011b, prost\u011b nov\u00e9 vhodn\u00e9 dopl\u0148ky, je\u017e s p\u0159\u00edslu\u0161nou zem\u00ed \u010di pro\u017eitky obsa\u017een\u00fdmi v textu n\u011bjak p\u0159\u00edm<\/span>o souvisej\u00ed.\u201d<\/p>\n

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Martin se op\u011bt nech\u00e1val <\/span>un\u00e1\u0161et Alexand\u0159inou k\u0159ehkou mluvou a z ka\u017edi\u010dk\u00e9ho jej\u00edho slova ch\u00e1pal \u010d\u00edm d\u00e1l v\u00edc. Alexandra sv\u016fj v\u00fdklad nijak neodb\u00fdvala, mluvila velmi rozv\u00e1\u017en\u011b a se zna\u010dn\u00fdm nadhledem kontrolovala ka\u017ed\u00e9 sv\u00e9 tvrzen\u00ed. Z toho bylo navenek hned patrn\u00e9, \u017ee takto o sv\u00fdch desk\u00e1ch nehovo\u0159\u00ed rozhodn\u011b poprv\u00e9. S ka\u017edou v\u011btou tak Martina p\u0159epad\u00e1valo tou\u017eebn\u00e9 p\u0159\u00e1n\u00ed spat\u0159it Helmuta na vlastn\u00ed o\u010di a se z\u00e1jmem p\u0159\u00edpadn\u011b pozorovat, jak se bude tv\u00e1\u0159it, a\u017e mu Alexandra bude p\u0159ed\u00e1vat spisy jeho zesnul\u00e9 Heleny a doporu\u010dovat mu je\u0161t\u011b dopl\u0148kov\u00e1 \u0159e\u0161en\u00ed, o nich\u017e se mu pr\u00e1v\u011b te\u010f zmi\u0148ovala.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u201eTak toto p\u0159\u00e1n\u00ed se ti m\u016f\u017ee dnes vyplnit. Helmut se tu pro n\u011b m\u00e1 stavit na p\u00e1tou a to je p\u0159esn\u011b pr\u00e1v\u011b te\u010f.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n

\u201eV\u00e1\u017en\u011b?\u201d vyvalil v naprost\u00e9m \u00fa\u017easu o\u010di Martin.<\/span><\/p>\n

Pr\u00e1v\u011b v ten okam\u017eik se ozval venkovn\u00ed zvonek. To v Martinovi nabudilo nov\u00e9 emoce, nebo\u0165 rozhodn\u011b nep\u0159edpokl\u00e1dal, \u017ee se jeho p\u0159\u00e1n\u00ed a n\u00e1sledn\u00e1 realita tak bleskov\u011b propoj\u00ed v jeden celek. Alexandra si t\u00edm hlavu p\u0159\u00edli\u0161 nel\u00e1mala a odsko\u010dila na moment do posledn\u00ed t\u0159et\u00ed m\u00edstnosti, do n\u00ed\u017e Martin doposud nem\u011bl mo\u017enost je\u0161t\u011b nahl\u00e9dnout.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u201eJe to on,\u201d upozornila radostn\u011b Martina. \u201eP\u016fjdu ho p\u0159iv\u00edtat.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n

\u201eA j\u00e1… no, nem\u011bl bych rad\u0161i na tu chvilku odej\u00edt pry\u010d? V\u00ed\u0161, abyste tady na to m\u011bli soukrom\u00ed,\u201d zm\u011bnil n\u00e1hle p\u016fvodn\u00ed n\u00e1zor Martin. Najednou si nebyl v\u016fbec jist\u00fd, zda to setk\u00e1n\u00ed, kter\u00e9 tak n\u00e1hodn\u011b p\u0159ivolal, ustoj\u00ed, a jestli o jeho p\u0159\u00edtomnost bude st\u00e1t i Helmut.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u201eJ\u00e1 mysl\u00edm, \u017ee tu klidn\u011b z\u016fstat m\u016f\u017ee\u0161. Helmut je velmi hodn\u00fd p\u00e1n. Spole\u010dnost nav\u00edc mu rozhodn\u011b vadit nebude,\u201d uklid\u0148ovala Martina Alexandra. \u201eNakonec jsi to byl ty, kdo projevil z\u00e1jem se s n\u00edm setkat a na tom j\u00e1 rozhodn\u011b nevid\u00edm nic \u0161patn\u00e9ho.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n

Martin tedy nechal v\u011bcem voln\u00fd pr\u016fb\u011bh a usadil se zp\u011bt na \u017eidli. I tak ale v sob\u011b nedok\u00e1zal pot\u0159ebn\u011b uko\u010d\u00edrovat vznikl\u00e9 nap\u011bt\u00ed.<\/span><\/p>\n

\u201eTo dopadne dob\u0159e, uvid\u00ed\u0161.\u201d Alexandra u\u017e m\u00e1lem opustila m\u00edstnost, kdy\u017e se n\u00e1hle na jej\u00edm prahu zastavila a Martina dodate\u010dn\u011b po\u017e\u00e1dala: \u201eTamty dve\u0159e nech, pros\u00edm, otev\u0159en\u00e9. Za momentek jsem zp\u00e1tky.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n

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\u201eTak to… tak to mi v\u016fbec nedo\u0161lo, to se… za to se hrozn\u011b moc omlouv\u00e1m,\u201d vy\u0161lo najednou z Martina provinile, jako by za Heleninu smrt snad mohl pr\u00e1v\u011b on. \u201eAle, Martine, no tak, netva\u0159 se p\u0159ece tak ztr\u00e1pen\u011b,\u201d za\u010dala ho … Cel\u00fd p\u0159\u00edsp\u011bvek →<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_s2mail":"yes","footnotes":""},"categories":[33],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-3422","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-city-means-i-mesto-plne-navratu"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/eldar.cz\/tompatrick\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3422","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/eldar.cz\/tompatrick\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/eldar.cz\/tompatrick\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/eldar.cz\/tompatrick\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/eldar.cz\/tompatrick\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=3422"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/eldar.cz\/tompatrick\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3422\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":3628,"href":"https:\/\/eldar.cz\/tompatrick\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3422\/revisions\/3628"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/eldar.cz\/tompatrick\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=3422"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/eldar.cz\/tompatrick\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=3422"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/eldar.cz\/tompatrick\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=3422"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}