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Tak\u00e9 se pamatujete na dobu, kdy se v devades\u00e1t\u00fdch letech u n\u00e1s ve velk\u00e9m za\u010daly uplat\u0148ovat takzvan\u00e9 \u010dajovny? Pr\u00e1v\u011b ty se vyzna\u010dovaly mil\u00fdm prost\u0159ed\u00edm jako\u017eto vl\u00eddnou pohostinnost\u00ed, kdy \u010dlov\u011bk si do nich p\u0159i\u0161el odpo\u010dinouti od b\u011b\u017en\u00e9ho \u017eivotn\u00edho shonu a stresu, popov\u00eddat si s p\u0159\u00e1teli a dob\u00fdt pot\u0159ebnou energii.<\/p>\n

Tak\u00e9 j\u00e1 jsem neodolal a s mamkou byl na otv\u00edra\u010dce jedn\u00e9 z nich, kdy mi byla objedn\u00e1na vrchovat\u00e1 m\u00edsa s kokosem, jen\u017e jsem jen st\u011b\u017e\u00ed spo\u0159\u00e1dal, nebo\u0165 jsem byl po vydatn\u00e9 ve\u010de\u0159i. Prost\u0159ed\u00ed \u010dajoven, tedy nejen on\u00e9 pod\u011bbradsk\u00e9, se o n\u011bco pozd\u011bji v\u00fdrazn\u011b projevilo coby inspirace pro moji Podzemn\u00ed rajon\u00e1du, je\u017e v\u00fdrazn\u011b ovlivnila d\u011bj prvotn\u00edho mochnick\u00e9ho City Meansu.<\/p>\n

Ov\u0161em nen\u00ed to tak d\u00e1vno, co toto, na prvn\u00ed pohled mil\u00e9 m\u00edsto, utr\u017eilo zna\u010dn\u00fd negativn\u00ed \u0161r\u00e1m. To jsem, op\u011btovn\u011b s partou p\u0159\u00e1tel po del\u0161\u00ed dob\u011b, vyrazil do jedn\u00e9 z nich a zpo\u010d\u00e1tku v\u016fbec nic nenasv\u011bd\u010dovalo tomu, \u017ee by n\u011bco mohlo naru\u0161it jej\u00ed ojedin\u011blou atmosf\u00e9ru. Le\u010d co se nestalo, do prostoru \u010dajovny zav\u00edtal i jeden mu\u017e, na n\u011bm\u017e ji\u017e od po\u010d\u00e1tku bylo zn\u00e1t, \u017ee ho n\u011bco nemil\u00e9ho podr\u00e1\u017edilo. To kdy\u017e se hned po p\u0159\u00edchodu utrhl na d\u00edvku, je\u017e tam obsluhovala.<\/p>\n

V obdobn\u00e9m duchu pak onen mu\u017e pokra\u010doval d\u00e1le, kdy se protentokr\u00e1te zam\u011b\u0159il na rodinku, sed\u00edc\u00ed u stolku hned vedle. Pr\u00fd co se m\u00e1 co chlubit prosperuj\u00edc\u00edm zam\u011bstn\u00e1n\u00edm, pr\u00fd \u017ee to zn\u00ed jak n\u011bjak\u00e1 ot\u0159epan\u00e1 fr\u00e1ze, je\u017e poka\u017ed\u00e9 doc\u00edl\u00ed pouze toho, \u017ee druh\u00fdm pocuch\u00e1 nervy. Na ot\u00e1zku mlad\u00fdch man\u017eel\u016f, zda to m\u00e1 co d\u011blat s t\u00edm, \u017ee dan\u00fd mu\u017e o sv\u016fj vlastn\u00ed job n\u011bjakou ne\u0161\u0165astnou \u017eivotn\u00ed n\u00e1hodou p\u0159i\u0161el, doty\u010dn\u00fd jen n\u011bco nerudn\u00e9ho zabru\u010del a pot\u00e9 se hnedle zam\u011b\u0159il na dcerku onoho p\u00e1ru. Pr\u00fd \u017ee to nebude trvati dlouho a doty\u010dn\u00e1 sama na vlastn\u00ed k\u016f\u017ei pozn\u00e1 zlov\u016fli partnersk\u00fdch vztah\u016f jako\u017eto nelichotivou nep\u0159\u00edze\u0148 v\u0161udyp\u0159\u00edtomn\u00fdch zhoubn\u00fdch nemoc\u00ed, jen\u017e v takov\u00e9m \u010dlov\u011bku buj\u00ed ji\u017e od narozen\u00ed, tud\u00ed\u017e \u017ee onu nebohou co nevid\u011bt p\u0159ejdou bezstarostn\u00e9 \u017eivotn\u00ed radov\u00e1nky a pak na smrteln\u00e9 posteli bude prokl\u00ednati den, kdy se narodila. Na man\u017eele s d\u00edt\u011btem to ji\u017e bylo p\u0159esp\u0159\u00edli\u0161 a ne\u017e aby se s mu\u017eem d\u00e1le p\u0159eli, rad\u011bji \u010dajovnu opustili. A onen nerudn\u00fd mu\u017e z\u00e1hy takt\u00e9\u017e.<\/p>\n

Nev\u00edm, zdali se doty\u010dn\u00ed znovu chytli i tam venku na ulici, mn\u011b osobn\u011b v\u0161ech bylo v\u0161ak popravd\u011b ale l\u00edto. Zat\u00edmco onen p\u00e1r s d\u00edt\u011btem patrn\u011b v \u017eivot\u011b pro\u017e\u00edvali \u0161\u0165astn\u00e9 okam\u017eiky (kdy\u017e do toho nepo\u010d\u00edt\u00e1m dan\u00fd incident), mu\u017e nejsp\u00ed\u0161e o to nejlep\u0161\u00ed v n\u011bm shodou ne\u0161\u0165astn\u00fdch okolnost\u00ed pr\u00e1v\u011b p\u0159i\u0161el. A n\u00e1hle jsem i j\u00e1, pro zm\u011bnu ve sv\u00e9m \u017eivot\u011b osobn\u00edm, za\u010dal znovu t\u00e1pat, nebo\u0165 ani mn\u011b se zrovna p\u0159\u00edli\u0161 neda\u0159ilo, jen jsem v sob\u011b nena\u0161el odvahu \u0159e\u0161it to takto ost\u0159e navenek.<\/p>\n

A tak bylo rozhodnuto! Podzemn\u00ed rajon\u00e1da mus\u00ed m\u00edt co nejpoeti\u010dt\u011bj\u0161\u00ed proveden\u00ed a v\u0161e zl\u00e9 v n\u00ed mus\u00ed b\u00fdti za\u017eehn\u00e1no a p\u0159em\u011bn\u011bno jen v to ryze p\u011bkn\u00e9. A tak Vera, na popud Alexandry, pozvolna za\u010dala budovat partnersk\u00fd vztah s Menorem a Kristi\u00e1n kone\u010dn\u011b do\u0161el re\u00e1ln\u00e9ho napln\u011bn\u00ed v podob\u011b nitern\u00edho p\u0159\u00e1n\u00ed, jen\u017e mu splnil tajemn\u00fd kouzeln\u00edk, z\u010distajasna se zjeviv\u0161\u00ed uvnit\u0159 t\u011bchto prostor. A jak tajemn\u011b se v nich objevil, tak rychle se z nich zase vytratil.<\/p>\n

Pr\u00e1v\u011b onen incident, zm\u00edn\u011bn\u00fd v\u00fd\u0161e, d\u00e1v\u00e1 odpov\u011b\u010f na to, pro\u010d byl prvotn\u00ed City Means mnou zpracov\u00e1n do jist\u00e9 m\u00edry pr\u00e1v\u011b tak poeticky a nikoliv p\u0159ehnan\u011b hrdinsky dramaticky. Ona p\u0159\u00edhoda s mu\u017eem v \u010dajovn\u011b, vlastn\u00ed neuspokojiv\u00fd \u017eivotn\u00ed stav jako\u017eto hled\u00e1n\u00ed pomysln\u00e9 t\u0159in\u00e1ct\u00e9 komnaty za n\u011b\u010d\u00edm na prvn\u00ed pohled ban\u00e1ln\u00edm, m\u011b vedly pr\u00e1v\u011b k onomu uv\u011bdom\u011bn\u00ed, \u017ee kdy\u017e alespo\u0148 text onu mo\u017enost m\u00e1, pro\u010d toho nevyu\u017e\u00edt a splnit si na onom kousku pap\u00edru to, co je v b\u011b\u017en\u00e9m byt\u00ed, vlivem mnohdy krut\u00e9ho a nespravedliv\u00e9ho osudu, re\u00e1ln\u011b nemo\u017en\u00e9.<\/p>\n

Po tomto up\u0159\u00edmn\u00e9m dozn\u00e1n\u00ed snad ji\u017e kone\u010dn\u011b spr\u00e1vn\u011b pochop\u00edte m\u016fj spisovatelsk\u00fd z\u00e1m\u011br a zm\u011bn\u00ed se v\u00e1\u0161 \u00fahel pohledu na moji celkovou tvorbu. Mo\u017en\u00e1 \u017ee n\u011bkte\u0159\u00ed z v\u00e1s to p\u0159\u00edmo zn\u00e1te ze sv\u00e9ho vlastn\u00edho \u017eivota, kdy\u017e se v\u00e1s n\u011bkdo zept\u00e1, zdali v posledn\u00ed dob\u011b do\u0161lo k n\u011bjak\u00fdm p\u0159evratn\u00fdm zm\u011bn\u00e1m a vy odpov\u00edte: na\u0161t\u011bst\u00ed ne, v\u0161e z\u016fst\u00e1v\u00e1 v zajet\u00fdch klidn\u00fdch kolej\u00edch.<\/p>\n

Pr\u00e1v\u011b toto se stalo m\u00fdm hlavn\u00edm z\u00e1m\u011brem v rom\u00e1nov\u00fdch po\u010dinech, kdy jsem se sna\u017eil p\u0159ipomenouti v\u00fdhradn\u011b to p\u011bkn\u00e9 a tomu ryze negativn\u00edmu se pokud mo\u017eno n\u011bjak vyhnout. Ne\u0161lo to poka\u017ed\u00e9, ale mysl\u00edm, \u017ee v prvotn\u00edm rom\u00e1nov\u00e9m City Meansu se mi to nakonec povedlo. Pokud jste to tak p\u0159i \u010detb\u011b c\u00edtili i vy, v\u00e1\u017een\u00ed \u010dten\u00e1\u0159i, je to nezvratn\u00fd d\u016fkaz toho, \u017ee m\u00e1 snaha nep\u0159i\u0161la vnive\u010d. Pokud v\u0161ak st\u00e1le m\u00e1te k m\u00fdm liter\u00e1rn\u00edm po\u010din\u016fm jist\u00e9 v\u00fdhrady, snad dan\u00e1 liter\u00e1rn\u00ed filozofie dojde napln\u011bn\u00ed v m\u00fdch dal\u0161\u00edch\u00a0d\u00edlech. V\u017edy\u0165 za co by \u017eivot jinak st\u00e1l, kdyby se v n\u011bm m\u011bl \u010dlov\u011bk donekone\u010dna jen tr\u00e1pit. Kdy\u017e ale, znovu opakuji, onen kousek pap\u00edru onu mo\u017enost m\u00e1 a um\u00ed i v t\u011b\u017ek\u00fdch \u017eivotn\u00edch chv\u00edl\u00edch zaznamenat n\u011bco p\u011bkn\u00e9ho, pro\u010d toho n\u00e1sledn\u011b pln\u011b ryze pozitivn\u011b nevyu\u017e\u00edt, \u0159\u00edk\u00e1m si znovu a znovu a n\u00e1sledn\u011b tak i \u010din\u00edm. No pova\u017ete sami, v\u00e1\u017een\u00ed \u010dten\u00e1\u0159i, nem\u00e1m alespo\u0148 v tomto pravdu?<\/p>\n

A co soud\u00edte o \u010dajovn\u00e1ch vy, v\u00e1\u017een\u00ed \u010dten\u00e1\u0159i? Chod\u00edte si do nich ob\u010das posed\u011bt, nebo snad d\u00e1v\u00e1te p\u0159ednost jin\u00e9mu pohostinstv\u00ed? Co soud\u00edte o onom nerudn\u00e9m \u010dlov\u011bku, o n\u011bm\u017e jsem se tu zmi\u0148oval? Zast\u00e1v\u00e1te jeho \u017eivotn\u00ed n\u00e1zory, nebo sp\u00ed\u0161e souc\u00edt\u00edte s onou rodinou, ji\u017e slovn\u011b doty\u010dn\u00fd napadl? Obl\u00edbili jste si v prvotn\u00edm City Meansu moji Podzemn\u00ed rajon\u00e1du? Zav\u00edtali byste do n\u00ed rovn\u011b\u017e r\u00e1di, nebo k n\u00ed zauj\u00edm\u00e1te sp\u00ed\u0161e opa\u010dn\u00e9 stanovisko? A co m\u00edn\u00edte o m\u00e9m ryze poetick\u00e9m stylu psan\u00ed? Je nam\u00edst\u011b vy\u017e\u00edvat se v\u00fdhradn\u011b v takov\u00fdchto pas\u00e1\u017e\u00edch, na \u00fakor on\u011bch srdcervouc\u00edch v\u00e1\u017en\u00fdch dramat rozepsan\u00fdch do sebemen\u0161\u00edch detail\u016f?<\/p>\n

Pros\u00edm, dejte mi v\u011bd\u011bt na tuto moji eldarovou webovou str\u00e1nku \u010di p\u0159\u00edmo do facebookov\u00e9 skupiny \u201eCity Means \u2013 M\u011bsto pln\u00e9 n\u00e1vrat\u016f\u201c. Klidn\u011b mi sem na web napi\u0161te pod smy\u0161lenou emailovou adresou, pokud nechcete uv\u00e9sti z bezpe\u010dnostn\u00edch d\u016fvod\u016f svoji skute\u010dnou. Nikdo se za to na v\u00e1s zlobit nebude.<\/p>\n

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